poem

[IJesusChrist]

I don't know if I'm just really into this cause it is mine but I felt a need to post this here,
it is about dreams, reality, and how my thoughts become intense..

The dream that remembers the past,
Before the birth, before the crest,
Showed to you through arbitrary means,
Feel it's touch on your face,
See it's presence in your days.
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A mangled wire in my head,
Try I do, to get to bed,
I close my eyes and count to ten,
Awake to grasp and write in pen.

I sit upright eyes closed tight,
Try to focus with mental might,
An inch above the waking ground,
My thoughts and visions begin to pound.

I grow anxious and cannot sleep,
A herd of wonder in a fleet,
I swing blindly for the image,
Try to rest and stop my feet.

They run along a pitter-patter,
Through puddles and over matter,
Every thinking thought left open,
Try to worry, try to flatter,
Get a grip on my self,
The longest story I begin to tell.

Begin with wonder,
end with rage,
The middle lost in stun,
I always try to gain my thunder,
Never to be done.

A closing eye to the worldy heaven,
An opening door to the free wanderer,
Clock is telling me eleven past eleven,
Help me seize this neuronal plunderer.

Synthetic hopes and dreams lay,
Artificial scenes play,
Natural is the selection found,
In my head,
This Earth is bound.

 

[BrainEater]

i like!! :thumbsup:
know that you are one with your thoughts so there is no need to be controlled by them. you can control your thoughts...
YOU know why it CAN be so important to control the result/outcome of your thoughts. something like that...
you are one.

kill your ego before it kills you. it's only who/what you think you are, therefore not real... thinking is not generally equal to knowing. if you would know, there would be no need to believe.
:arrow: :arrow: :arrow: don't think you are.... know you are...

my most wise good old friend yoda said: "fear leads do anger, anger leads to hate, hate leads to suffering".
death is a star...

lol i can imagine what a mindfuck that must be ... but i don't give a shit.
just kiddig alright... take it easy my friend.

peace

 

[IJesusChrist]

thanks, no need for the advice though, it is simply a poem meant to present a feeling.

and obviously it did since you were compelled to help me :wink:

 

[Matt294]

Really liking the poetry. When I started to reading the poem I had no idea how it's gonna end. And at last I found it very beautiful.