Are these good ideas for some lyrics ?

[yourownworld]

Hi you.

well last night I got a lot of shit in my mind and i wrote some ideas that i could develop but I cant juge if they're interessting or not. btw I was thinking too about a psychonaut's collective work

01. Once upon a time (or maybe twice)
about archetypic, mental conceptiosn similarities of history that are just the same stories in other contexts


02.Terms of use
about click agree or disagree nothing does matter. One second album, time doesn't matter.


03. Learning to lie
about who know will ever lie, experience, words jail...


04. A bunch of nettles for you
about nobody take care of usual things,the first fat girl was beautiful,nettles provides butterflies,grow on rich earth...


05. Paintings made of blood
about someone free who makes sculptures with cans of beer...


06. Gay mind
about loving a person's mind without beeing "physically" gay.


07. Fool by thousand looks
about when each cross of eye makes you feel thousand different feelings


08. I wanna be your cigarette
about how she sweetly kiss her cigarette


09. The forgotten show
about all these sensitive, expressive persons who dance (improve) and think in front of only a few artists


10. Seeds of gods
about all these potent people who never realise they could've been grown to an half-god, include myths of indigo children...

Please tell me what you think, brainstorming guys anything that leave your head will be read

peace

 

[Guest]

Hard to tell without the melody or bacground music. Maybe you should post a rough recording for our proper review.

Ironically, my girl and I just made our first song and posted it on a torrent site for all to download and here.

I just put it on www.thepiratebay.com www.torrentportal.com www.torrentspy.com and www.isohunt.com to:

http://thepiratebay.org/tor/3688076
http://www.torrentportal.com/details/11 ... p.mp3.html
http://www.isohunt.com/torrents/?ihq=raindrop
http://www.isohunt.com/release/91987/raindrop
http://www.torrentspy.com/torrent/1171578/raindrop_mp3


maybe one of these will work better, if you are at all interested in hearing it

Contructive feedback is always valued.